I like both images - specially the right one is a stand alone without any doubt.
Personally I find the wording a bit heavy, too much of.... - whatever, nice handling of the light.
The left image is again too ''arty'' in it's expression - but I like the white in white mood there.
Two images with a lot of potential - the result of the presentation isn't really my cup of tea - but I believe in the photographic technique you used, and the fairy-like expression of your model.

Jeg liker bildene veldig godt hver for seg, men synes ikke montasjen passer så fint til. Flotte stemningsbilder, hver for seg...

Mari