Hei KG.

Takk for nytt bilde!

Jeg synes dette var et livlig bilde i en stram komposisjon.

Rosen var også fin med den svært dype rødfargen, men jeg liker ikke den midtstilte plasseringen. Til høyrte kunne den sjult deler av underarmen som ikke bidrar med noe i bildet synes jeg.

Jeg foretrekker øyekontakt med modellen.

Fortsatt god romjul, mvh Jan

En flott bild KG. Med modeller som denne får jag god lust att flytta til Sverige. Det synes vara god tillgång på rara modeller. Hennes smil smittar.

Wow, vad hon är vacker! Och vad duktig du är alltså! Det här kallar jag perfekt helt enkelt! Gott slut!

Wow, vad hon är vacker! Och vad duktig du är alltså! Det här kallar jag perfekt helt enkelt! Gott slut!

It's interesting to watch the development - or call it changes in your portfolio - because it is really possible to see how your focus is changing, where you find a new - and often better approach etc.
To my personal taste I like this image better than most others - and without saying that it is right or wrong - a small list of items/issues with the potential of a question-mark :

- definition in the eyes
- clarity in composition ( here I think about the ''role'' of jewelry and rose )
- small adjustments in the lighter parts of the face
- a potential to increase sharpness when being so close ( eye-lashes etc. )
- a kind of strange end of the image - it is the arm holding the rose - but this is not really straight - the appearance, interruption of ''white'' is to my mind not really positive.

As said - these are just the issues I had in mind when looking on it - and it doesn't mean that this is matching your idea, perception etc.