Kanskje bakgrunnen er litt lys?... vet ikke, bare en tanke.
Kanskje prøvd en raskere lukkertid, for å undereksponere himmelen ''litt''. Det kan gjøre seg, men jeg er ingen proff, og bilde var veldig bra, med fine farger og god komposisjon:)

Hei

Jeg synes komposisjonen er bra, men jeg blir ikke helt komfortabel med bakgrunnen - virker litt for urolig.
Veldig fine hudtoner/farger. Også veldig bra kontakt med modellen.
Mvh. rak

Veldig god kontakt med modellen.
Fine farger, bra skarpehet og dybde.
For meg var ikke bakgrunnen forstyrrende, jeg synes den er med på å lage setting i bildet, strand. Jeg synes håret som flagrer var litt forstyrrende.
Alt i alt et bra bilde.

Bakgrunnenn funker for meg,nydelige naturlige farger. la den inn som skjermsparer på widescreen skjermen hjemme funker helt perfekt.
Bra Tore.

Tack så mycket för era kommentarer. kul att den verkar funka, det var min första bikini session ute :)

Jag ska se om jag kan öka trycket i himlen lite på resten av serien i photoshop.

Mvh//Tore

My impressions after looking leave me with the clear feeling that I'm looking at something I do not really understand.

Woman in a bikini close to the waterline makes somewhat sense - placed on the stones says right away
- Attention, this image is posed and should express something !!
( which is perfectly fine )

This something I do miss - but it might just be me.

a few things I believe you could think about, not saying they are in general wrong or right, they just don't fit in my view :

- the letters on her bikini - draw a lot of attention - without contribution to the image.
- this sort of setting '' on the beach '' with painted nails and rings can work when really playing on it - otherwise I see it is irritation - not the theme fitting.
- the head on the same level as the horizon gives me the feeling of a ''squeezed'' image.
- I'm not really sure if not a wider image, without cutting her legs, would bring more balance into the image.
- I like the light, especially of the right side of her hair.
- the background is ok ( but looks a touch coldish ).
- he direct, straight view into the camera with all make-up is - I don 't know - the face isn't really telling me anything here, I guess the face should explain more how she feels about this setting - does she feel comfortable, seductive or relaxed etc.

All in all - a lot of good elements, but to my view it misses the composition of these elements.

Tack för din feedback.

Mvh//Tore