Liker uttrykket paa ansiktet til jenta, men det er litt for tilgrodd og moerkt paa hennes venstre side. kunne vaert litt mer detaljer.. ellers saa uttrykker du ett god oeyeblikk...

Synes ikke det mørke gjør så mye... Kjempefin stemning!

jANARKerik

Fint bilde bra stemning

Kanskje litt for mektig skygger her, men øyeblikket og stemningen er fint fanget. Når det gjelder komposisjonen forstyrrer uregelmessigehtene i stripene litt.
Mvh. paal

Jeg likte dette, men kanskje det hadde vært hakket bedre hvis ikke hodet var kuttet så mye?

Hærlig bilde. Masse stemning. Liker det akkurat som det er.

fett bilde. pen jente

:-D ! son tarjeiav !

Visions - Patty Smith's introduction to her cover-version of Jimmy Hendrix '' hey Joe ''

Honey, the way you play guitar
Makes me feel, makes me feel so masochistic,
the way you go down low, deep down into your neck
And I would do anything, anything
And Pattie Hearst, you’re standing there in front of the Sudanese Liberation’s army flag with your legs spread,
I wonder if you get every night from a black revolutionary man and his women,
Or were you really dead, and now, that you are on the run, what goes on your mind.
Is it yesterday you were sitting by the window ?
Now your Mom and dad sit and crying
And you know what your Daddy said Pattie ?
And you know what your Daddy said Pattie ?
He said, he said – only 60 days ago she was such a lovely child
And now – here she is – with a gun in her hand


Suggestive power of music